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Ode to a Flower by ~samhatie94:iconsamhatie94:



The beautiful flower sways in the wind,
While it watches the children play.
It remembers when it was young,
Playing with its friends,
She cant remember anything else,
Except the sight of her parents,
Before they wilted and rested in peace.
She knew it was her time to go,
So she went all alone,
So she could die in peace.
But before she saw the light,
Her parents came to life,
And lifted her spirits to live,
Thanks to a raindrop,
That fell from the sky.
©2007-2009 ~samhatie94
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Author's Comments

another one of my poems that i had to do for a project for my class a couple of weeks ago but i dont have school anymor so yay!!!!!!!!!

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:iconlcshaver06:
Wow beauitful poem. It flowed terrificly and was overall well formatted.

Great job!!! :#1:

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this is really good!! I'm proud of you :clap:

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WHEN THE MONKEYS ATTACK i'LL BE HIDING IN THE CELLER WITH MY BANANAS, GOOD LUCK TO ALL THOSE WHO RUN TOO SLOW.
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thanks

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Rawr!!!!

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WHEN THE MONKEYS ATTACK i'LL BE HIDING IN THE CELLER WITH MY BANANAS, GOOD LUCK TO ALL THOSE WHO RUN TOO SLOW.
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rite back atcha

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